Fragrance

Honestly, am I a good writer?
Here's something that I wrote about a month back and is just something that I thought up when I was bored. It's completely random. I just wanted some critique on it as I don't often let people read my work, especially people that I know well. But I wanted some honest criticism. I am 14 years old and was home-schooled until I was 10, and have only recently started trying to develop my writing skills. The wind was gentle; soft and calm, it rolled up the hills and rolled down again. Tall stems of grass swayed in the breeze, and their dark green beauty was permeated with the musty fragrance of freshly-fallen rain. The moon, high in its blanket of darkness, threw a hazy film of light across the landscape, and a smattering of stars ringed its luminescence. The bubbling music of a stream could be heard, carving its way across the earth. Among the rolling hills and the grassy plains sat a girl of nearly twenty years, folding three crisp stalks of grass into a jade plait, which she tied in a neat bracelet around her slender wrist. Her dark, plain hair was worn loose, hanging in a delicate curtain around her slight shoulders. She was sat cross-legged amongst the grass, and she was clothed in a simple, floral dress and sandals. A moonstone hung from a leather thong around her neck. Note: spellings may be different from those of American writers as I am British. In addition to the above paragraph, here's the prologue of something that I have previously posted online (a writing website). I prefer to write fantasy as opposed to any other genre, if that helps in any way. A chill breeze sways the skeleton limbs of trees in the churchyard. The moon hangs in the velvet sky, a silvery orb, casting distorted light over the bare ground, leaving dark, crooked shadows in the places it cannot reach. The frosted grass crunches as footsteps make their way across it. ?Where is he?? A quiet voice asks its companion. ?I thought you said he?d be easy to find?? ?I can sense him,? the other replies, ?he is not far.? The first speaker grumbles his displeasure. A ways away, under a worn marble gravestone, the grating sound of nails scratching against a coffin can be heard. There are small pockmarks in the earth surrounding the grave, telltale signs that the mud and dirt underneath has been shifted. The men stop. ?Did you hear that?? the first asks. ?Yes. He

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Does this tinted moisturizer from Physician's Formula clog pores?
So it's their "Organic Wear, 100% Natural Origin Tinted Moisturizer" Usually I see something that says "Non-comedogenic" however, I don't see it on this package. All I see is, "Hypoallergenic, Fragrance Free, Dermatologist Approved".

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Help me pick a perfume :)?
Hey there! I'm a 13 year old girl and I'm looking for a nice perfume, not too expensive though. I like fruity, florals, tropical, sweet, fun, fresh, citrus scents. I don't want anything strong, just something appropriate for school/everyday wear. I currently have my eye on the Vera, G.Wang, Princess and the Harajuku Lovers, G perfume. The perfume store where I am at only has the 100ml Princess bottle for $94 and 30ml G bottle for $45. But they are currently having a sale: Princess for $70 and G for $33! Is it worth the splurge? I would appreciate it if you described the scent and gave me the average price range for the product. I would also appreciate it if you do not suggest "Eau De Toilette". :) **I am not trying to smell good "for the boys". Just want to smell good. Would you please answer these questions: - Appropriate age to wear fragrance: - What body splash(es) would you suggest? - What perfume(s) would you suggest? - What perfume for Spring: - What perfume for Summer: - What perfume for Fall: - Do you wear perfume at the beach, if so, what kind? :) --Bonus Question: What two colours in a room would you paint your room? Thank you for taking time out of your day to answer my questions! x

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Find out from EWG which toxins are contained in various fragrance products used daily.

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